Reviews for The Waif
Eirien chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Intriguing, especially the last line. I like it.
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Great haiku but the last line really captured me. Fantastic job.

Daze
Needa S chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Beautiful! Thank you for the kind review and putting me on your favorites list. Keep up the awesome work.
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
"She's her own mother.."Wow!This last line really got to me. It makes a powerful statement.

Also, I love the the titles you have for your poems. I forgot to comment that in the last one I reviewed. But they really are inticing.
castelgard chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
beautiful.. so few words portraying a simple yet powerful image..
AuthorNinjaEarth chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
A smooth and gentle haiku. Excellent work!
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
This is my absolute favorite piece of yours that I'm read. I love the middle line but the last line (again) is my favorite. I also love the title.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
autogenesis,

flowering without pollen,

or the bees that fly.

Many mixed feelings about your terse words. Abandonment and pain; and yet I know that out of that maelstrom emerges beauty. Life, ever persistent, seeks its future even in a dismal present. m
Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
It's good to see you back on the scene again. Missed you.
Leodel V. Del Fuego chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Tragic yet very pretty image. Nice job! _*LEODEL*
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Wonderful twist and visual. Great haiku.
Doc Blood chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
I like this. "The child is father to the man?"