Reviews for Day Dreamer Of The Night
KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
nicely done, but i would suggest changing the word " night" on one of the two lines where you repeate the rhyming word

" so black against the night

No cars, no roads, no city lights,

just you and the darkness of night"

( ex. just you and the darkness in sight)

Also it is correct in poetry to capitalize the first letter in each line.

either way, i enjoyed reading this poem ) Nicely done.