|Reviews for Hell High 06|
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
from being in the same kind of situation at the moment I feel I really understand this. I feel the same kind of thing about leaving everything behind, just in a slightly worse position than you perhaps. I really like the addition of particular people's names, particular memories.I love this part:'After graduation no one will rememberWho I wasOrWho I fuckedOrWhere I got highAnd the world would be that much better for it'.I hear you. Great work.
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
wow. i really liked this. your school gave you your fiance and best friend and strength - sounds pretty good. anyway, back to the poem.i loved the last line - it was unexpected and refreshing to read. i really liked all of this actually, this is going on my favourites.
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
So true. I really like your writing; you're really good at expressing your emotions. The emphasis on certain parts of the poem worked really well, too.