|Reviews for I will pretend|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Ah yes, the moments when we wish that dreams were really kismet :) Good stuff.
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
Oh, wow, I love how this is written, its so easy to relate to, and its so true. Beautiful.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Ah, yes... I like to imagine things how they should be... which is always beneficial to me...
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Wow, I loved this, great.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Some truly unique phrase work in this. I like this because it is kind of drapped in possibility, maybe and what if's. I also enjoyed the specifics of this, they help the reader relate to the individuals. Well written.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
ahthis is like part of my life written and dictatedeveryday
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
doesn't everyone? :)