Reviews for and it will crumble
Vesna Kallima chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
to answer your "summary ... into about 15,0 teeny tiny pieces

to answer your poem, i like it! i like your imagery! more of that red and black i was talking about, but it's REAL...

keep it up! .. vk
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
A story in poem format! Very well written; flows nicely. -
bahaghari chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
amazing combination of movement and emotions. and very affecting.
KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Nice poem, but you lack punctuation. Also "i" should be capitalized.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
This is a well written piece. Good job. Write on!