|Reviews for and it will crumble|
| Vesna Kallima chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
to answer your "summary ... into about 15,0 teeny tiny pieces
to answer your poem, i like it! i like your imagery! more of that red and black i was talking about, but it's REAL...
keep it up! .. vk
| onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
A story in poem format! Very well written; flows nicely. -
| bahaghari chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
amazing combination of movement and emotions. and very affecting.
| KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Nice poem, but you lack punctuation. Also "i" should be capitalized.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
This is a well written piece. Good job. Write on!