Reviews for Forever Yours
Shadow of the Black Wolf chapter 11 . 5/1/2007
Glad to know you are continuing. Waiting..
Shadow of the Black Wolf chapter 10 . 9/19/2006
I do like the story so far and am patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Shadow of the Black Wolf chapter 9 . 9/11/2006
I like this story so far and I hope you update soon.
MKREE chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
You've got a good start here. :-) Your main character sounds like she's got some experiences behind her and more to come! It should be interesting! I'll be back to read more!

K Ree

PS. Check out the update to my latest story. :-D
GracieLOu chapter 9 . 8/30/2006
you swear more in the story than you do in real life! good story! keep up the good work! :)
cutebut3vil chapter 9 . 8/11/2006
this story is really good. can't wait till the next update
delusional101 chapter 9 . 8/11/2006
Very cool story, I'm looking foreward to an update!
DynamicEquilibrium chapter 9 . 7/20/2006
Damn, he's a vampire. Nice twist, I like it. He still seems arrogant though, lol. But that's just me. Nice turn, don't know how the first day will go down though, sorry. It didn't let me review the last chapter, so I did it here.
The Emerald Eyes chapter 9 . 7/19/2006
Hey this is a great story so far! Please keep up with it
codyismypup chapter 9 . 7/19/2006
Wow, this story is awesome. let's see, normally, the main character would go to school and either

a) Get on the bad side of the most popular girl in the school (you could do this, say that Derrick was showing her alot of attention and is jealous)

b) Bump into Derrick (most used) and fall ontop of himc) Or you could have a surfertype guy (of course it's snowing all the time, snowboarding)fall for her, and stalk her or something and have Derrick save her or something

Okay, there's my ideas. Of course there not that original, so you'd have to definitly tweak them up a bit (try alot) Oh, Tammy has introduce her to her friends, and maybe sign up for track and wow them with her mad skillz, , have fun. Update soon!

-Avey
SolisLuna chapter 9 . 7/18/2006
Hmm, not sure about the first day but you could make chapters longer by putting some of them together and stuff like that. Good story!

sL
Ollie May chapter 9 . 7/18/2006
So far this is really interesting. I like the tension you have between Lynn and Derick.

As for suggestions, I think it should just be a first day of school like any other she's had to go through. You already have a good base of friends with Tami and Rupert, although I would get her to get to know Rupert a bit more. The stuff with Derick, I don't think there should be anything dramatic on the first day, maybe he even ignores her a little bit because he's got his hands full trying to keep all the school girls away from him.

That's about all I can offer, I think you've done a wonderful job with this so far, just keep doing what your doing! And update soon, I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Ollie May
ThoughtsOnPaper chapter 9 . 7/18/2006
I just wanted to say I like your story. Her first day of school could be a good place to introduce new characters or have her start getting to know Derick better..just some helpful (hopefully) advice!
starburst19 chapter 9 . 7/18/2006
loved it update
Cilissa chapter 8 . 7/16/2006
I started reading this story. It was good at the beginning, but it kind of fizzled out. I love the twist though! It revived it! I would never have guessed he was a vampire... KEWL! Keep writingCheetah-of-lemurs
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