|Reviews for Dreams in a Dying World|
| je suis une pomme du terre chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
omg I really really liked this. I like the last two lines especially. I also like how free the poem is, and it flows really well.
| Scarlet Hero chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Thanks for the review, even though it was damn harsh, but you do have alot of good writing skills. Good work on the poem, it's very nice.
| Rogue Blank chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
This makes a whole lot of sense, and it is amazingly accurate. I feel almost the same way, but maybe slightly different. I do like it and it portrays what some others may see in the world of today, but they never make their thoughts known.
| HeartSongMusicLyric chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
I read this poem and all i can think about is, hell ya! What the hell is wrong with this world, let alone America. I love how you fused so much of what's going on in this world of America in a piece that's not to depressing but not to lenient on the reason for writing on this subject. My favorite line in this piece would definitely be "Like a phoenix from the ashes, too bad we shot it down as it rose again" i love the irony you used in this line. Well done, i'd say that this is my favorite political poem so far. Keep writing!