Reviews for A Vampire's Pet |
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![]() ![]() can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() WHN DOS DA NXT CHPTER CME OUT?!11?! UUU PROMSED IT WUD B SUN. LIARRRRRR. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story really sucked me in, just amazing... can't wait for more chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Please continue your story! It's extraordinarily good, and I would like to see it finished :) Cheers Bella |
![]() ![]() ![]() no! he can't be dead! T-T |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah... i was so excited, i didn't even see the rest of the chapters... yeah, it's kinda late... |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, you really need to finish this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Goddess. That was the absolute BEST story i think i hve read in days! The love hate relationship they hve is REALLY great. And i have to say, they are getting really...CLOSE to each other (in you know what i mean..). XP But stuff like loving each other one minute then him having to leave the next is Always a great suspense! I LUV IT! I am looking forfard to the next chapter. Please! pleasepleasepleaseplease... Update Soon! Luv Ya! ~Lyssa~ (angelwolfyuki) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww. i'm/she is/ you are, whatever pronoun i should use in a review on a story in the second person, so stupid! i have so many different thoughts running through my head at the moment, but i can't write them down. fustrating chapter. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think it would be better if you used third-person narration instea of secon-peron narration. you aare using the wod "you" to much an after a while it gets repetative and makes the story somewhat boring. But i like the storyline itself. :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was sad... I don't want Tallor to leave. Haha, good chapter and Yay! You updated sooner! and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww. poor me/you, whatever. fun. i now know what person you're writing in. funny, i always thought of first person as the sort of diary thing, i etc, second person as the he/she variety but hearing the people's thoughts, and third person as being the objective narator. now i know it's not exactly like that. long time no update, but still as good as ever. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! It has been SO long since you last updated! Great chappie though, hope you update soon again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL when you call it AVP i think of Alien . wonderful story. cant wait for the rest! |
![]() ![]() Hey Lissa, this is ur #1 fan , lol i love this story so much well i'll be honest Im new on fictionpress and yours is the first horror story i read and i just couldnt stop! i was supposed to do my chores but i couldnt do anything but sit mesmorised and read on I'VE FINISHED ALREADY! im so sad, please write more I know ur dissapointing a lot of people. Everyone deserves more than a mediocre stories & THIS WAS THE ABSOLUTE BEST! i was like one with the story and now that i've finished reading it im upset [ please write more! oh and i have no comments on how u could make it better, because i think its perfect already! I'll wait for more chapters, Your loyal fan, ~xJassx~ |