man, mimi just has a strangehold on the Roe-Deleuw family. Charming chapter I must say, and I cannot wait for your next update (whenever that may be! haha)

Aw. It's not good to be sick. But good chapter.

I really truly seriously adore this story.

I forgot to ask about a few chapters ago.

WHOISTHATGUY?

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Sorry. *gasps for air*

The panties thing got to me.

An entertaining chapter for sure.

Haha. Love this story.

I want a guy like that too :)

Yet another great chapter.

I love how they fell asleep outside.

Okay, I swear I do actually have an account.

*looks guiltily to the side*

I do though. Haha.

But I love this story.

It does not suck!

It...what's the opposite of suck...?

Haha. You get my point right?

A one line note that changed her life?

Very interesting. Haha.

This chapter a good.

P.S. I'm too lazy log in.

Just curious, is the guy POV Seth? Please say yes. At first I wanted it to be Robin but I think that Seth understands her and to him she isn't something new and interesting while Robin is nice he will never be able to connect on the same sort of level that Mimi and Seth have...

Awsome story, update soon!

Gup

Wow, you have amazing talent. In that last scene, I'm torn. I'm 90% certain that it's Seth's POV and I don't know if I'm angry/upset that he could break Robin and Mimi's (adorible) relationship, or fluttery and happy.

In other words, I can't decide between Robin and Seth, which is strange for me because when I'm reading a story, I usually pick out one and only one favourite male lead and put my heart out for him throughout the whole story, but this has left me with my hands covering my mouth, staring blankly at my laptop screen not knowing AT ALL what I'm thinking.

Bravo. Mucho Bravo.

P.S. Please update faster!

that last part was so, so, unbelievably sad. im guessing, and i kind of hope that im right, that it was Seth speaking, because i've been rooting for him since the early chapters XD.

i hope, hope, hope, that, somehow, Seth will end up as the male lead, because even though i adore Robin, Seth seems more real, and fun, and just completely lovable.

Hey

Loved it

Though I'm so on team seth 4 a while I wasn't you know, I was just undecieded but reading this chapter made me too his the prince charming I think because all though Robin is nice his just not right and I love Seth because he loves her well I hope so I really hope the passage at the end was from him because it just seems so seth in someways his just I dunno I think his just the guy and gets her more than Robin ever will.

I dunno I just love this story

but seriously plase update

SOON

PLEASE

Wow. awesome, awesome chapter. and I'm am almost certain that it was Seth's POV in that last scene. I liked how he thought of Mimi. and Robin and her were very sweet. I'm glad we know who the note-writer is. Robin is very nice, I guess I haven't really gotten used to them going out. great writing. please update soon.

Aw I love Duck. And Mimi really needs to just go get that haircut. I love how you are moving not only Mimi's story along but also Jess and Kevin's (God, I just want that boy to figure things out already!). And I'm completely at a loss for who the note writer is, but I think I'll say my guess is Seth - the whole songwriting thing pairs nicely with the poetry. Question though - do YOU even know who it is? Anyway, I can't wait to find out, so, even though you're undoubtedly busy, please keep writing!

Hmm. I can see how Moon River could change your perspective on this, but I'd like to encourage you to keep trying with this, because I still love it. And honestly, I didn't catch any different or awkward feel with this chapter. Fantastic as always!

I LOVE 'Mr. Jones'!

Anyway. Mimi is adorable. Her clumsy dorkiness kind of reminds me of myself (I think I've gotten clumsier as I've gotten older, which doesn't seem fair, but whatevs). And as I mentioned last chapter, I love her friends so so much. Also, loved the almost-runover scene; I feel like that would make a great movie scene.

I love Mimi and her friends so much! I think you have captured perfectly the quintessential -being- of best friends; the sentence-finishing, mind-reading, laughing, joking, speaking seriously, loving mess that is friendship. And I love this story. It's a bit funky grammatically, but since you keep that constant it works as a style rather than something to be criticized.