|Reviews for Counting Chickens|
| Dwindling Fire chapter 5 . 4/11/2010
ROFLMFAOO! bahhaha LOVE IT! funny shit man :L
| Dwindling Fire chapter 3 . 4/11/2010
LOL i was wondering if the bro was hot :L
| Dwindling Fire chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
LMAO the last sentence. omgg, that is so nasty! i had to urban dictionary what 'pants' was until i figured it out..and then i read on and got it. LOL nasty (Y) love it!
| Dwindling Fire chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
haha, like it so far! OMG THANK YOU! no body ever understand me and the reason why i dont like cinderella and the other ones! i mean, love at first sight! what are they teaching the children! but ariel is my favv
| InhalingFumes chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
It's a VERY nice story. No sarcasm there. Nope. None at all.
| SimplyDevine chapter 12 . 2/20/2010
Oh my god i absolutly howled with laughter at the bit where she was bring chased lol...ah i love Mimi lol!
And agina ...i want a Seth...can i have A Seth plz?
| SimplyDevine chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
Aw i feel sorry for Seth...because thats him at the end right?
(Or am i just wwishful thinking here?)
But yeah i love Seth...duno bout Robin, he seems a bit iffy to me lol...maybe cuz i'm a seth fan hehe!
I adore your story by the way! Cnt wait for an up date he he.
| choc me chapter 12 . 2/20/2010
Ok..finished reading this for the second time, and this time, I really read it carefully and paid attention to lots of little things.
I love it...really, it's priceless and I love the way u write - the feelings come out so clearly and there's something very profound in this small, sweet and funny story...The characters are very much fleshed out and that makes them so likeable...theres something very simple n true abt Mimi...
I'm looking fwd to more!
| choc me chapter 11 . 2/19/2010
Seth! Mystery guy is Seth! I mean the guy whose thoughts we've been reading abt...It was either Robin or Seth cause of the reference some chapters back to Brady's funeral, but this last bit has confirmed it...
And Mimi felt lost and even cried a bit, because deep down she likes Seth too right? And not Robin, in spite of all the sheer perfection and smoothness.
I know the final pairing has been decided already and I can't help but hope it's Seth...Robin's too..perfect, unreal..
| choc me chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Hi! I'm re-reading this over until ur next update..there's something abt this story that makes me happy inside and i dunno...hopeful maybe? I love Mimi, and I really like the way u write..
| Cyan.x chapter 12 . 1/28/2010
i absolutely adore this story it's so charming (i've never used the word 'charming' before and i feel corny using it) but it is! XD i really like seth. i mean, robin's not bad at all and he sounds very sweet, me just likey seth more ah. um. can't wait for an update!
| Jessiquie chapter 12 . 1/15/2010
wow, this is an extradoinary chapter. The little snippets of their friednshp (Seth and Mim) are so adorable, and so real. Their so honest and real together and its refreshing. They don't feel forced, either by nature or together. If you cnpuldn't already tell, I adore Seth. he's so much deeper than the other characters :)
Poor Mim though, hope she doesn't get sick from the duck saving dive that she took.
I've been reading your story all week and I so can't get it out of my head, hope you update soon!
| Jessiquie chapter 11 . 1/15/2010
Omg! I'm so torn right now. As you would have noticed I've been fairly heavily a Robin Roe supporter for a while. Wanting it to be him, even wishing for one myself. But then seth came around in all his seth like glory and i totally bought into him. aka last chapter's review. I found it adorable thet he;d jsut turn up places for the hell of it and that he was just as awkward and unsure of things as she was. and then this chapter. that cookie monster comment was totally and utterly adorable. It was a light comment, made in some what passing fashion, but I'm so sure it meant more than that. When i read it, my heart felt as though it stopped beating for a second (obviously it didn't) and there was a pain there almost because even as just a fictional character I could tell he loved her. The cookie comment was just ...naww. And she's oblivious too it. the whole connection about cookie monster knowing what he wants and going after it and the fact that she bought HIM cookies and ...I'm such a hopeless romantic i know, so I respect and expect the way your laughing and cringing at my expense at the momment. I think I knew for sure then that it was going to be Rob who meet her as a secret admire and him who was more truly deeply into her... and the last section proved it so much!
Ah! Can you tell I just love it!
| Jessiquie chapter 10 . 1/15/2010
ohh. Despite last chapter, I'm convinced now that Seth is mr. secret admirer. He knows who it is. obviously, and i have to admit i thought he was lying when he said it wasn't from him back in the nurses room or whtever. though considering every review that I've written just about for this story, I've gone from one boy to the other completely and utterly confused. I've got reasons for my choices obviously, but your so much better at hiding it all from me and other readers.
naww theres some really sweet scenes in this chapter. It's adorable. Poor Jess though. She has guts though and mroe intutive then she realsies. It takes a lot to stand back after so long and realise all that. Even more to be willing to wait. Great characterisation. Great everything.
| Jessiquie chapter 9 . 1/15/2010
I beg to differ. I liked this chapter. I think you're imagery and your way with words is beautiful. Most of all I don't think this story is silly. I really really want to know what happens next. Your rather well with developing suspense and hiding true identies and the rest. I'm still really really in the dark as to whose sending her the notes. I'm desperate for it to be Robin, because frankly he sounds amazing. But theres something holding me back from him and i think it might be the fact that the letters are a silent way of letting Mim know she has a secret admirer and well, Robin is very publicly doing the same thing. He doesn't need there to be a secret. Seth though, he just mentoined the teachers name, so it could be him. He has a dark adn mysterious side, but he also seems hell bent on his cousin and his cousin right that he should of driven her home. He no longer seems to have a girlfriend, but truth be told that never really stopped anything at all. ver much intrigued by your story and writing. I seriously love it. And I admire you. I'm not so sure, actually I most definately am sure that I could not pull it off even half as well as you can.