Reviews for Counting Chickens
insatiablehunger89 chapter 12 . 9/4/2009
yay! update! i feel the same way Mimi does too, except i don't daydream about the prefect guy. I do like to go outside at night, and just run around, not caring. I always drive around to the park during late fall and winter when no one is there and relish the cold and the inexplicable feeling i get when i swing on a swing. Now that i'm going to college next year, I'm thinking even more about inocence and youth as compared to growing up. It's sort of depressing, and i am already wishing i could go back to being seven years old and doing everything over. So, yeah Mimi's character is very easy to relate to, and I absolutely adore Seth! Robin, on the other hand, I don't like. It's got nothing to do with your writing, though! I kinda get the feeling that Seth and mimi and up together, but we'll just see, won't we?
RoseBriar32192 chapter 12 . 9/4/2009
YAY! UPDATE UPDATE! Ok, so this chapter was AMAZING as usual! SO you HAVE to update ASAP, or you know maybe TODAY! Anyways I loved it and I can't wait to read more! - RoseBriar
Eefs chapter 12 . 9/4/2009
This update was really cute! I love Mimi and Seth's relationship and the things that Mimi thinks are so real, I can really relate to them. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Jestry chapter 12 . 9/4/2009
YES YOU UPDATED! (: (:

I LOVE THIS STORY. Like, adore it. Especially this quote:

"For a long time, I was quite convinced that this would happen, because I was too special to have a dull and normal life. If nothing else, my letter from Hogwarts would be arriving in the mail shortly."

Because I swear every little kid things that at some point or another before they stop believing.

Haha, I really really really worship your ability to characterize Mimi. She makes me laugh so hard, and I always look forward to this story updating because she's so fun to read about.

I'm still convinced that Seth secretly in love with Mimi. And that Mimi is also secretly-subconsciously-in-love with Seth. I hope you update super-duper fast because this story makes me happy!

Jestry
lovelybuns chapter 12 . 9/4/2009
I don't know if it's just me, but I think I like Mimi and Seth better together. I dunno, it just seems like their personalities draw together more strongly than Mimi's and Robin's. But I like Robin too! Of course, I do, but you know, there's that one guy that always makes you think twice... :)

Oh, and you should try Walmart. They're going crazy turning their stores into Superstores. THEY HAVE EVERYTHING, oh my gosh. I think I saw some Disney princess underwear there. IN THE PASSING, of course, you know, as I walk up and down those aisles... yes...

LOL, OK! Thanks so much for your update! Hope to see your story at the top of my favourite list soon! (Where it means that you're the recent author to have updated... :T Just saying.)
hopeless-flame chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
AISH.

i love love love your stories.

their awesome.

and i love how seth and mimi have that random, awkward, weird connection.

its the best )

a love tale unfolding... ;-)

keep it up girl!
wandless chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
Hello. I don't have anything interesting to say because I've kinda forgotten the plot of this story and the plot summary didn't really help :( or maybe I'm just too stressed to take the time to read it properly. But yay for being 20, aye? A real adult thing. I'm turning 19 next month and am rather devo about it because 18 has been an excellent year.

Stay sweet,

Liz.
rainbabie chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
Oh to be young and think 20 is old. *sigh*

I love your updates. They are so different and entertaining. Can't wait for your next one. Good luck with college - which I totally miss!
gingeresque chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
oh! that was a quick update! Mimi is freaking hilarious and a force of nature. I was hoping the admirer would be seth though, haha. Thank you for updating!:)
Angel chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
Ah. An update! Brilliant chapter. I prefer Robin as a girl's name though, XD. The last couple of lines were amazing... ah. I love how you write Mimi. At first I thought it was a tiny bit dull, but then... wow. Eek. I'm such a surface reader. Totally loving this, and I hope you update soon!
aims80 chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
I really enjoy this story. So much so that I read all 12 chapters in a row when I should be doing a million other things- like working or studying... I have to say you write very maturely for someone who is only almost 20. You'd never know it by your writing style. Keep up the good work.
quotata chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
a great chapter to have all of mimi's quirkiness resettle into our minds.

love it!
readernotwriter1 chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
OH MY GOD! AN UPDATE! OMG OMG OMG OMG! YAY!THANK YOU!

I'M IN LOVE WITH SETH! robin is just too too perfect! robin sounds like a girl's name too haha! please please please update soon!
blackrule chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
Trust me. There isn't anything special about 20 or 21. Just another number. Never feels any different from before you aged a year from the last except for the more distinct feeling of responsibility. It is nice to see an update after so long though ;) It would be cooler to have a bit more Robin parts though I think, since they're dating now. But keep the other characters in the story like they are too. Good luck at college. Can't wait to get there myself! :)
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
i like your story so far
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