Reviews for All in the Family
TheOutlawHadMercy chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Good job, I'm loving the cliche.
sofiya05 chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
hey,

omg...nice start...i'm loving the whole cliches...they're so cool anyways can't wait till you update, i want to read more..

Sofi
noriepie chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
yay! i already like this story. 'tis is wonderful. Good : (1)Second sentence of the last paragraph: and/an (2) The sentence after that: that left me in the awkward place in the same house *with* my worst enemy.

I have a question. On the third sentence of the last paragraph, since it's on current time,wouldn't it be better on the present tense? Cuz i have a problem with the tenses, it kills me. bleh.
hasseena chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
HiThat sounds really interesting. Update soon. )
A Sinful Tragedy chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
I'm really looking forward to this story! I like how you combined the whole hate/lovestepbrother thing. Update soon.
minute-glass chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
great start ] i saw a couple of spelling mistakes, but it's not that big of a deal. update soon ]
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