|Reviews for On to Empty Spaces through Open Windows|
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
beautiful, heart-rending. this had just some wonderful imagery in it.
| cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
I think we all have a time where we ponder on this thought, always wishing and hoping about whether our admirer likes us. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I love the way you worded it 'to open that time-rusted window' as if we've visited again and again. Great work
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
oh geez. awesome. really good job. i love the format. the longing is so real. i love it.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
i like that last line the one in a gazillion... and the format is great too.. thanks for your review!