Reviews for Cos Heaven Ain't Close In a Place Like This |
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![]() ![]() Loved this! Yuu shud continue. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Know what would be really awesome? ...If you updated. ] Your storie's really good & I think it would suck if you stopped updating it. I want to find out what happens between Zach and Elia & learn more about them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap-what? You seriously-you seriously haven't stopped writing this, right? I mean, it's been over a year-but jeez, this is too good to stop! Please, update soon-Do it for the children! (ha) But in all reality, this is really good-a very pleasant find for me and fictionpress. I love the tension and fighting and the confusion-it's just great. You express emotions really well. So, please please please continue! (I NEED to find out what happens between them-NEED) |
![]() ![]() there is no update in almost a year. I see this will be a long time wait. Good luck if you moved or something xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() God why is it that shrinks always have that damn condescending air to them. Totally emotionless. wouldn't it do you better to let them feel at home then make them feel like you are watching their every move. Also for some reason I can totally imagine Elia in my head xD I can't really imagine Zach too well for some reason. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! this always happens! I alwyas find a good story...and then realize that it hasnt been updated in ages. Anyways, I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your profile says English isn't your first language? geh, your cruel.. very cruel. I think you do a better job at writing with it then I do. :P But anyhow, I really really do hope you get the chance to update soon. I love your characters and the story. :( I really wanna know how things end up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE tell me you have more! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love how this story is progressing so far. Zach's the perfect snarky protagonist: his narration is fun and doesn't let up! Elia definitely interests me a lot: I love how his character has so many layers (speaking metaphorically, of course x]). I eagerly await the next chapter! Hope you don't mind me adding you to my author alert list! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY SHIT YOU UPDATED! haha I had to re-read the story because I almost forgot about it. nice job. and don't see a shrink because they will take your superpowers away. DBD |
![]() ![]() ! You finally updated! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best Explanation for Being High EVER! Funny Real Funny I like your humor I also like how the main characters aren't very cliched Well except the bitchy cheerleaders thing It's a little over done Regardless, good story even though i've only read 4 chapters Still very entertaining |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! It only took you forever to update! How many times have you moved? You make it sound like a million. Anyway, the story. It rocks. Still. Despite the whole you not updating in forever thing. Elia is really something...He's, like, so cool, in a strange way. And Zach is just weird. What are the chances you'll, like, kill Mrs. Sharpe via a piano on the head? 'Cause that'd be awesome. Really. Update faster this time or I'll...Um...Do something mean with my Ladder of Doom. Or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the chapter! It was awesome! *snickers* Bathroom scenes are pretty much favorites of mine. Can't wait til you update again. Adios! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I don't like Mrs. Sharpe at all. She's, like...awful. I think she's the one that needs help... It's been forever since you've updated! I really can't complain though, I haven't updated my one story in forever... Anyway, another great chapter. You rock. Another update this year would be great, just so you know...Heh. |