| Reviews for Cos Heaven Ain't Close In a Place Like This |
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   dreamerdoll chapter 6 . 1/28/2007 oh, wow; i love this story so far! terrific job with it. i must say, I love Zach; he's hilarious. eila (definitely a feminine name) is...well, an awesome, hilarious character that I can't help but not like much, just because of the point of view. Jamie, however, i adore to no end. LOL. He's just so...awesome, i suppose; i love his little temper-tantrum; i'd do that, too. His dad, though, is a jackass, and his therapist sucks. i hate them both *nods decisively*...i'm kinda curious about elia's mom, though. anyway, update soon, please! |
| bR0k3N chapter 6 . 1/28/2007 yay you updated! I loved this chapter and please dont take too long on the next one! |
| Opal Rose chapter 5 . 1/21/2007 This is really good. Zach is so cool. So is Elia. I love how he's always so...Happy. Ish. Happyish. Yeah. Update soon! Please. |
| Vigniti Tres chapter 1 . 12/28/2006 I love how observant yet detatched the tone in this chapter is. It is incredibly in key with our protagonist (or maybe he might be an antagonist in disguise?) and his feelings towards things. I also love your syntax in general - how ast it is in a poetic manner in a parallell to the quick actions that are going on in the piece. You don't find a lot of pieces that start out with this sort of thing here on fictionpress, and its something that I see much more honest and realistic - especially given these characters. Your writing holds a bunch of promise and I am exicted to read more of this, and I am also incredibly giddy that you left out names in this chapter - something that happens to be a common trait in some of my shorter writing (that I don't happen to post here). I am suprised that english is your third language, you have a very clear and powerful grasp of words that is uncommon amongst those who speak english as their first language. |
| puppy dog eyes chapter 4 . 12/4/2006 This story is really good so far. The plot flows and I can't believe English isn't your first language. Your story is writing in perfect english so far. |
| icedjinn chapter 3 . 11/22/2006 I notice that you say your English is bad, but it's actually better than most people's on this site. |
| the-griever chapter 1 . 10/29/2006 Damn it! You're good with your English. As for the story, it's amazing. I find your characters really cool. Moving to the next chapter. |
| Me chapter 4 . 7/12/2006 Ahh, this is so very well written! You have much talent. Please write more soon, i'm looking forward to reading more. :) -D.F. |
| bR0k3N chapter 4 . 6/23/2006 o0o0o PLEASE WRITE MORE! this is really good! more more MORE! |
| bR0k3N chapter 3 . 6/23/2006 wow... the joys of rumors! |
| bR0k3N chapter 1 . 6/23/2006 I like this story so far lol! |
| Esquirella chapter 4 . 6/13/2006 Zach's got a complex life. Poor guy! Jamie may not be helping matters - but he's still cute as hell! |
| Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doom chapter 3 . 5/25/2006 Ah, when he said that about his stepfather saying he was a freak, my lovely little Lashie-chan was whispering in my ear that he meant it sexually... Lol! Yes, it has been a while. I had to go back and reveiw the story before I read this chappy . But I'm really glad you didn't just fall off the face of the earth. And you've hooked me on the story all over again, so it's all good. I can't wait to read more. 's and X-Rated Thoughts- Luci-chan |
| Esquirella chapter 3 . 5/25/2006 Zach's so apethetic it's hilarious. I like seeing Elia ruffle his normally unconcerned countenance. Great chapter! Jamie's adorable! |
| Limited Edition chapter 1 . 5/18/2006 Ooh priest smex? I hope they do it on the altar! *crosses fingers* Lovely descriptions. I love that you tell about the background so freely. The flow is perfect which leads to good pace too. There is a bit lacking in the front of description about how things look though. I also like the plot! Good job! |