| Reviews for Color Me Cliché |
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   Kash.16 chapter 2 . 5/8/2006 More chapters please...story's really god... x |
| sharese chapter 2 . 4/30/2006 love your story so far; keep writing! |
| zephyr deity chapter 2 . 4/30/2006 "Lead the way captain"...that's so cute. Update soon please. Oh and since you said that you could review stories...can you review mine? The first two only cause the last two are extinct. Thanks in advance. |
| Eeri chapter 2 . 4/30/2006 Aw... he loves her. Great story. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters. Dinner should be interesting. |
| nicotinegirl chapter 2 . 4/29/2006 nice job. i really like your story. but just one suggestion: can make ray a little less crazy, and try and slow things down, making ray's love for the main character less obvious. ok that was 3 suggestions. oh, love you're story by the way. rock on. |
| nollie chapter 1 . 4/23/2006 i luv cliched luv storieyay chliches!lolitz so cuteupdateupdateupdatenollie |
| Sapphire Wings chapter 1 . 4/23/2006 Nice start to the story haha )Very cliche but I don't mind cliche _ Sounds like someone's jealous O hehe* But it's cute. Hope you update soon! When you have time, come and review my story as well Thanks! Adding to my favs. |
| zephyr deity chapter 1 . 4/23/2006 Nice story though you might wanna go over some errors. “Mark Bryant like you!” I drop the compact. “What?” I say... you should stay in the past tense instead: "Mark Bryant like(s) you!" I dropped the compact. That sounds better dontcha think? |
| Lifexisxwrittenxinxwords chapter 1 . 4/23/2006 OMG this story is so cute! I can't wait for the next chapters. Hahaha I love it when Grace and Ray have those little fights...it's so cute...and Mark seems like a hottie...well UPDATE SOON! |