Reviews for Break Me Down
Knocturne chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Now this, as someone who listens to ALOT of music from everygenre, i can say this is a good song. It has alot of playful vocabulary and funny imagery, i especially liked "It's crimson skies, behind dark eyesFollowing close, falling behind" Very good. I didnt like the third verse at all though, it seemed to stick out and not belong at all. Pleasent Prose!

Knoc~
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
OMG I love it so much, I love the rhyming and the structure of the chorus! Masterful
Maddie Fyrce chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
that is so cool. seriously, way better than my attempts at song writing. good job!