Reviews for A Castle in the Sky
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
What a beautiful poem with just lovely imagery, especially the metaphoric-like idea of a castle in the sky.

Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Oh, how I LOVE castles, especially those that float in the sky...have written more than one poem on the same theme myself. Mostly posted on under a different name, but ah well. Just take my word for it.

They represent something so ethereal that we don't have in this life. Something "missing" of sorts. No wonder you awaken "again" from you "Castle in the Sky."

Love the line "Every sensation feels as if it's a cheat..." Yes, it does when we're happy, whether in reality or fantasy.

Thanks for the review...Beautiful poem...will check out more of yours later on...
SamiKismet chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
I loved the imagery you used there. Towards the end of the poem, I had images still in my mind. Good job :)