|Reviews for Keeps Me Breathing|
| K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Wow. I love the beginning. Especially these lines: "And to think you let it drag on when you could easily take it away
It’s too late-I don’t want your help
So stay the fuck away from me!
The empty space is overwhelming-
I need to be somewhere that I will be as isolated as I feel…"
I have thought this often but have not been able to put it into words like you have just done. And the twist at the end, surprisingly unanticipated. I like that. Good job.
| eraced chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
beautiful thanks for your review and everything you said was right. that poem was just aimed at about three people who where being horroble because of a disagreement and i though i'd write a poem to anoye them. any way thanks and keep writting.
Disapering in the dark.~erAced~