so sweet thank you

Wow this story is so adorably cute. The way the mood was set and their conversations didn't feel forced but went with the flow. I noticed the word 'veritable' often popped out at places which is my new favorite word now.

The girl is adorkably cute and the guy is deliciously romantic. The way you described them had me. Hooked

kudos

So much sweetness and adorableness

That must be very embarassing. Good grief this is so cute.

Go tawnie!
Good luck :)
Hanna.

aahhhhh omg omg omg*jumping up and down like a little girl* I think i had my goofiest smile on for most of the story. they are soooooooooo adorable.

You are extremely good. You should seriously think about getting yourself published.

Awwwwwwww dude this is absolutely wonderful!
I'm filled with so many fuzzys right now. This story has made my day! X3

I love the ending! And I also love the description of her brother!

Aww cute story!

I love the whole concept of your story, how it wasn't too "cheesy" (though I have no idea how their relationship would work out afterwards) but when she told Nathan that the two poems were about him, wouldn't you be pretty freaked out if someone had a crush on you for so long? But other than that, it was cute :]

So, what about Janelle?

Wow, I loved this so much! :D It is amazing! I can't believe you were 14/15 when you wrote it haha. Seriously though, I enjoyed every second of this story! ;) Feel free to write a sequel :P

Just found you now. I wish I found you earlier though. The story is great and I completely vote for a sequel! Haha. You are an amazing writer.

Your new reader,
Clawstrike590