Reviews for Like a Moth to the Flame
RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Nice work, it was very well written.

I like how you described unrequited love. Some people sink into the hands of depression in love poetry, it's all "Woe is me." But not you, you kept it light, with just a hint of tragedy. Good job.

I'm thinking there should have been more punctuation, maybe some line grouping. It would have made it flow much better.

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fictitious facades chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
wow, when I saw the title, i was thinking of another poem by the same name, one that my english teacher had us read. I love how your poem toys with that subject, but is not completly revolving around it. Great Job.
Jay-Ling chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
I adore your work.

A very good piece.
Jodie Sinclair chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
i like the part about duct tape this is really good
Melissa O'Day chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
this is a very unique peice. I love it! yay! Very nice, Sarah