Reviews for greener, even
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
love the opening. green, green, green...
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
The imagery in this poem is amazing, and it has a very mystical and fantasy-like feeling to it. Wonderful job. Keep writing! :)
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Oh, this is so damned gorgeous! So very green, and mythical...I think the last stanza is *beautiful* it's the perfect ending touch! Esp. the very last verse, so sad! It's very tragic, very epic at the same time...(*listening to Autumn's Monologue* :-P)...this is a fantastic poem you definitely should be very proud of! Such a rich vocabulary makes the reader see the forests and glades where she lives; this actually reminded me of elves in the Silmarillion...kudos! Love, Mia