|Reviews for cut on this angle|
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
oh, wow. this is so beautifully written. it's incredible how something this short can say and mean and have so much to it...
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
it's like heartbreak written in code or something. i think there should be an 'is' in the second line or maybe i've just become illiterate.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Wow, that stings (so, good word choice, lol). I like this. It's short and simple, but it packs a punch. Nice job. Keep writing! :)
| acccountkiller chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Ouch. That's really the first thing I thought when I read this, lol, sorry...this conjures an idea of lost innocence/virginity up...to me at least...it's very harsh I think, really a sad fate :(. Love, Mia
| lackluster chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
interesting format; i really like the use of color too. beautiful.
| in theory chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
I like the cut format, it looks like bars from one side, or blades of grass. Structure fabulous, and I like the use of irony too.
| water lily nymph chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
So tragic, the end is so powerful, and I love how you seperated the lines that way. Nice job. ~*
| Aldo chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I like this poem.