Reviews for Rain
AsianScaper chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Interesting how the cuts in the lines facilitate in reminding one of the pattering of rain drops. Love your imagery. Particularly like:

"Open my mouth to the Skye

until my throat was full

and you poured off my chin

into my cupped hands."

Wonderful! Keep writing!
followureshadow chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Don't you love rain? I absolutly love rain. Beautiful poem..