|Reviews for Rain|
| AsianScaper chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Interesting how the cuts in the lines facilitate in reminding one of the pattering of rain drops. Love your imagery. Particularly like:
"Open my mouth to the Skye
until my throat was full
and you poured off my chin
into my cupped hands."
Wonderful! Keep writing!
| followureshadow chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Don't you love rain? I absolutly love rain. Beautiful poem..