Reviews for These People
just you and yourself chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Anyone could relate to this... nice rhyming, too. Great work!
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
The end made me laugh, but it's easy to see your frustration in the poem. Well written! I like your style a lot. I wrote "Tears in the Darkness" in April- not too very long ago, but a few months. Thanks for your reviews! D Maranwe
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Sara! I posted a new poem; check it out, okies?

As always, you blow me away. Stunning work! Keep it up!

~Anna~ _
White is a Sin chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
HAH i like the ending. Very good i really liked that. Nice work. Good rhymingthanks for review _
Morwain chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
That was good i like the was funny in a way
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
o lovely twist at the end. I like it, the rhyme(not sure if that's spelled right) was very good. Awsome job, rock on!
NowNameless chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
cool. i love the twist at the end!


psthanks for the review!
Pookin chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
Great poem, always like a nice twist at the end to make you view the whole poem diffrent. Keep up the good work.

- Pookin, Thanks for the review D
free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
excellent poem! totally loved the ending! keep writing
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
The ending took me by surprise. Excellent work.
Kenshinswife chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
I Love this poem, and t think you HAD to write for english, so it's like you had to think of it, I'm awful at poems for school! I love this poem, awesome job! it's perfect!