|Reviews for Vivisection|
| portera.k.a. ashton chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
sensational! I was so provoked to think of the meaning in the last sentence! And the beginning almost reminded me of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost. great story!
| Carwyn Jones chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I loved it, except the bit where you said 'wandering of dirt'. Doesn't make much sense to me (although that might be me being silly :S). What about wander-way. It's not a word, but it's hypenated, and it SOUNDS pretty.