Reviews for Vivisection
portera.k.a. ashton chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
sensational! I was so provoked to think of the meaning in the last sentence! And the beginning almost reminded me of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost. great story!
Carwyn Jones chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I loved it, except the bit where you said 'wandering of dirt'. Doesn't make much sense to me (although that might be me being silly :S). What about wander-way. It's not a word, but it's hypenated, and it SOUNDS pretty.