|Reviews for Conjugation of the irregular verb 'Andrew'|
| shining defiance chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
I like the idea here, and I can see where you're coming from. I especially like the title. Irregular verbs can be such a pain, but you made this work very well. Nice job :)
| Katie chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Back, to plague you with another long, rambling, probably nonsensical review.
Very sweet, and cleverly written. The ending's sad... am I sensing jealousy, possibly much resentment towards this 'He'? Or am I overanalysing this? How you managed to be inspired by a French lesson is beyond me, but well done - and I love 'You (pl.) scorn'. Aww.*sniffle*
That's about all I have to say about this little but well thought-out poem right now, but expect an email sometime soon with a lot of rambling about how sweet it is. ! Katie
Anonymously reviewing annoys me. Maybe I should get an account. Hmm...
| Vinay chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
hey, just caught this after looking at ur msn space. I'm not gonna pretend to know anything about poetry or writing but i like this - very slick, new (to me at least), great idea. And not too depressing like your other stuff. I don't know why it's depressing, probably just cos it makes me think. I don't enjoy well, all in all, I'm impressed. You have another side to you i didnt know bout. on dude
| Poppy chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
hey, i was looking at your new poem, and then others and i saw i hadnt reviewed this one, i swear i had, bt maybe i jst talked on msn. anyway, it's really clever, and i think in fact "i love You, but" does work, even though it's not a verb like the rest of them. v gd poemx
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
i loved it. almost like a haiku...
| A Rabid Zealot chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
Well Hideho there! I like this, it has a certain air. I ain't being sarcastic, I mean it!
| Olivine chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
aww that was a sweet poem! i liked the shortness of it- the lines and length, both. i dont know why but it made it better than if you were to have extended it, or something.
keep on writing M.W. Renaee-::-
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Like Johnny, I take German so I really know where you're coming from with the conjugation part. It's heartfelt and I really like the "You (pl)" part. v.v. good!
| simply meg chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
aww... touching:) Nice work... :):D Write On!
| Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Hey, this is an awesome idea. I take German, so I now have an appreciation for conjugating. Yeah, I probably shouldn't mention the second line since others have. This is really cool though. :)
| Chelseamuffin chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Hm... Different? Yes, very different. The beginning was... kind of weird. I understand why you did it come ca, but it still felt kinda weird... meh. Still good. Write on!
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
interesting poem. good work
| cynick chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Seems wrong there. I can see why you did it, but it just doesn't quite work.