THIS STORY I RELATED TO WELL. ITS PROBABLY BECAUSE IM 16 AND I KINDA FEEL LIKE HAYDEN. I HAVE ALL THESE THINGS IN MY LIFE THAT GOING HAYWIRE AND THERES NOBODY TO HOLD MY HAND LIKE GAVIN DID. INSTEAD FOR ME I READ STORIES I RELATE TO I GO IN MY OWN LITTLE WORLD AND WRITE SOMETIMES. BUT WHEN ITS ALL OVER YOU KNOW THE PROBLEM IS STILL THERE. I COULD ACTUALLY PUT MYSELF IN HER SHOES BECAUSE I KNOW HOW SHE FEELS AND FROM ALL THE PRESSURE YOU CAN GET A LITLE DIZZY...GREAT STORY

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awsome, well what ive read of it!

Ah got absolutely nothing done today because I had to finish this story. I loved it. ...Like a picture painted with words. Keep up the good work, and I will do my best to read all your stories - but not today - time to eat and be productive! Your writing is like Pringles. Once you pop, you can't stop. Mwa!

Wow, amazing. I loved this story, heartwrenching and I could relate to a lot of the characters and their emotions. There were a few grammar/spelling errors, but overall it was really great.

but... what happened to Brody in the end? did she change back too?

Hey! I just wanted to say that I absolutely ADORED this story. You're an amazing writer who creates such realistic character's and whose narrators speaks in such a voice you feel with her, are completely drawn in, and are able to discover her unique personality through her words. Honestly, Hayden as the narrator was one of my favorite elements of the story. You have a marvelous way of drawing one in and tapping into the reader's emotions. "The Long Road" has become one of my favorites stories on here, definately.

I was curious though, you never exactly resolved the issue with Hayden's sudden fainting attacks, and the story of her brother doesnt exactly seem to have reached a closing point. Are you plannign a sequel? Or are you leaving it open to the unknown, as so much of life really is?

Anyhow, I loved the sotry, positively addicted to it. You've great talent! Keep up the good work! -

oh wow I have missed alot of this sorry I've been away on vacation. So is this the end? Because I want to know what happends does Trent come back or what? Well loved the passed few chapters keep writing hope you do something new! fan of your writing ~sierra~

Hey yayayayay another update I love this story! Presley really thought she and trent could be together? Wow I know she's taking it hard but she's dealing with it the wrong way but I've dealt with things in the wrong way too. And that last part Gavin and Haydin falling asleep wrapped in each others arms so romantic lol sorry anyway I hate that this isn't getting more reviews it's really great sorry my moving it to another catagory didn't

Aww what Gavin did taking Hayden away for the day was really nice it was good for her to get away but poor thing she has soo much on her. I want to read more update! update lol.

Hey good chappy. You know this story deserves more reviews maybe if you put it under young adult or something it's only an idea hope you don't get mad I just noticed it only has around five or so reviews and it should have more it's great. Anyway hope to see an update soon! :)

wow when will someone see she can only take so much I mean she's passing out from all the stress or something, and Presley is messed up she's kind of ungreatful not seeing that her friend's just trying to help her but then again I've been there pushing people away.. Anyway enough rambling update ASAP!

Wow that was a change I hope she doesn't start being like Presley going to all the parties But good chapter! Oh and I'd love it if Gavin and haidin got together sorry for spelling her name wrong.

Oh wow update this it's really really good! Those pan cakes chocolate chip and marshmellow sounded so yummy damn I want the recipe! lol But anyway write more please I hope Presley can stay out of trouble but, something tells me she wont, I hope she doesn't end up like Trent's girl friend.

Hey, I'm enjoying this so far, I'll be back to read more!

Hey,I really like this plot so far it's really good :) Well off to read more