ok so nice intro i just need more information what is going on, i guess...

i just wrote this review so u can type another chapter preferrebly fast...

hey i'm sort of new and i really begun to like ur stories... too bad most are very short so im left with a cliff hanger.

Please continue writing, remember there are people out there who want to read what u write. Please i beg of u...KEEP WRITING!

Hey! (This is your crazy Italian friend from school, by the way. I'm using my online name...)

Well, as I expected, fantastic! I swear, it's not fair that you're so good at this. The tone is perfect, playful but also serious enough for the clearly hefty topic, narrative but also containing that hint, the undertone of mystery that makes you want to read more! And the way it progresses, with a teasing conversation that briefly gives a glance at the characters into the conflict of the plot, is really nice.

Needless to say, I love it! Truly spectacular! I wish you would update it, there's so much you can do with this! And if you've really got the plot all laid out, then I see no reason why you don't continue. You'd be so popular if you did! And it would make me deliriously happy! I think that's reason enough in and of itself... _ Puh-lease?

yay! i read it hehehe so keep going. the beginning is very intriguing. keep adding chapters and dont make it too confusing! love you!

Awesome..

its pretty interesting