Reviews for Silver Casket Cadidate
scripted chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Wooah that gave me chills.

I love the way you put such a dark subject with such an innocent poem. But it really is disturbing. ...In a good way.

Sounds like a brilliant advert for drugs actually. I mean, an advert for NOT taking drugs. xPP

Great job,

-scripted
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
This was... hilarious! It was supposed to be, right? Juxtaposing a nursery rhyme against boozing/drugging? Because... I found it hilarious! I loved it! It just really wasn't what I was expecting.

Also, I loved the rhyming scheme. It was really good, and although some lines had more syllables than others, it was still very well done and flowed nicely. It had a good rhytmn.

Sorry for the spelling mistakes, I'm just v. tired.

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in my profile]
Thurayya chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Oh, this was wonderful. Short, sweet, sort of bitterly funny. I actually read it in the Twinkle Little Star tune. My only problem was in line 4; it was hard to incorporate, but I still did it. Nevertheless, it was a bit awkward.

Good job. )

- ala