|Reviews for Where Are Your Dreams Now?|
| Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
This was a very well written poem. It sets the scene of reality and a quiet creeping dispair very well and truthful. The dreary effect is very good also. Especially in the part where you put 'This is my home, my shelter, my house, these are my surroundings and they dare ask me why I still cry'.
Those words after the previous parts before hold the deepest and most poignantly intense meaning to it. As if it really shows how the person in here has given up.
Very well written and touching. I seriously compliment you. This will go right in my favorite stories because I like it so much.
| kirsten was chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
wow, that was poignant