Reviews for Balcony Girl
Kid Blader chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
I think it was a great piece of work! I just wish my experiences in band and such could be as great. No one ever breathes as one. So out of order...
a lonely september chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
this is written so nicely. the detail, the beauty of it. you did a good job withthis. : )
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
you make me depressed with your authors note

i thought it was brilliant in the way that it was so honest

it was real, so real.

it didnt landscape off into the land of poetry. a well worth escape.
mist laden chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
interesting lyrical scene here. Liked the ending line best, "There was only passionate, pure existence." I actually can relate to the narrator's feelings in this. I love opera.

"I suppose I will always be her crazy writer..." Yeah, that definitely rings true. Minor suggestion: "Sometimes I would write of love, sometimes of hate and bitter sorrow". That lines seems vague, and "bitter sorrow" is kind of cliche. Maybe some more specific nouns.

Overall though, very enjoyable.
bagle-worm chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
Ah, very nice. I love the power of music. -grin-You may want to re-proof that, there's a few grammatical errors that interfere with the flow, but other than that, it's very nice. Kudos!