Reviews for Hard Candy
dreamerdoll chapter 4 . 1/27/2007
just have to say that i thought the first few chapters rocked, because it gave us a pretty nice idea of who NIKOLAI is, and that is the whole purpose of first-person pov, in my opinion: to build a "closer relationship" with the narrator. besides that, as you said, characters progress over time; you don't notice RIGHT AWAY what kind of problems nikolai has. there would be no point to the story almost if you just came right out about the characters. and i know i'm totally late with that, but i wanted to comment.
xanthofile chapter 28 . 1/22/2007
i can't believe i didn't read this before, when it was first sent into my inbox...heh. oops. anyways, i read it now, and i about died laughing for quite a bit of it. desya is a skunk, really...*cracks up*

at least he can play nikolai without actually using as much effort as you'd think. big skunk, but that's what we love about him! adorable fucktard, yes.

and he's probably just shot himself, no?
Assia Wells chapter 28 . 1/22/2007
More, more more! :3
Virginia Giselle chapter 28 . 1/16/2007
Wow, I didn't think Desya had it in him!

That was an awesome chapter.

Revenge is sweet!

Update soon! I promise to read on time... :]
Virginia Giselle chapter 27 . 1/16/2007
Yay for Desya pointing a gun at Isaak!

I like this chapter title. _
Virginia Giselle chapter 26 . 1/16/2007
I hate Isaak.

Nikolai married? Can't picture it.
Virginia Giselle chapter 25 . 1/16/2007
Another great chapter...

I can't wait for the next..
Virginia Giselle chapter 24 . 1/16/2007
Kolya on the drugs is really quite emotional isn't he?

I like it though. It's a real change of pace for him.
Virginia Giselle chapter 23 . 1/16/2007

Kostya can't be dead... Pasha needs him...

Desya's mother turning up is really random though... wonder what her role is?
bR0k3N chapter 28 . 1/11/2007
haha this was hysterical! OH-MY-GOD. haha!
SerialXLain chapter 28 . 1/11/2007
xD Leone is great... The Star Wars and the blueprints.

Chinchillas are adorable. I want one.

Haha. Desya turned into a sex kitten. XD

If I were a hitman, I would have business cards.

KageNeko chapter 28 . 1/10/2007
Aw it makes me laugh but at the same time. Its pretty upsetting how a way Desya was willing to go for Nikoli, But i guess thats how much of an effect of change Nikoli had on the poor boy So Excilent job. Please keep up the work
abandonnnnned chapter 28 . 1/9/2007
Ha ha I love Leone! I loved the whole 'Blueprint' fiasco; it was pure brilliance. I was also all "FIORE!" then realised she said about one line. The Mona Lisa rant also highly amused me. As for the Chinchilla (I always thought they were dogs lol), I am curious about what it will be used for! I was surprised at Desya screwing Nikolai over... but not disappointed. I do wonder what Sevastyan's opinion on this will be!

Fave Line: “No, no, he’s never that neat. Sledgehammers are favored.” (Gold)(Zaq!)
AnnaG.Luv chapter 3 . 1/9/2007
Just started reading this story but I gotta say I really like it!
Lidyah chapter 28 . 1/9/2007
Leo. Seriously you have a sick humour to write someone like him. Best chapter ever

/sorry for the crappy review. But hey it's one nonetheless.
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