Reviews for What You Hate
Scrunchy chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
Heh, another good poem! A strong title, does not leave the reader disappointed with this. I like the variation in line length. The last two lines:"They may be your feelingsā€¦But I have a right to know what it is that you hate about me"are very strong, with a nice twist, and that is all emphasised by the short and then the long, explanatory line to end. Sorry, I'm waffling now ;) Well done!