Reviews for Romance
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Gorgeous. Keep writing!

NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
that was beautiful...great portrayal of emotions
odanion chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
This one hit me quite deep...I liked this one alot, it cought me into wanting another one like this one
Ice and Snow chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
adorable...) it's very interesting. i love your words.
Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
There is something unique about this poem. Itis surrel and it is honest towards the aspects of romance. Nice job!
lordelfy chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
really good i like
angel1357 chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I like the feeling this peom gives. keep up the good work!

Oh, and thank-you for reviewing!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
interesting second to last line... kinda unexpected.. well done
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
SO BEAUTIFUL! i love the imagery and the feelings in this poem! great write!
Sarah Rizal chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
This is deep and sweet. Loved it.
Embellished Heart chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Lovley write. My fav line:

Your heartfelt moments, dream.

Really great!~Dana
Lissa Wyga chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
very beautiful imagery. I loved your choice of words, I loved this stanza, 'Delicate blossoms bloom,Petals drifting on the wind', so beautiful.
Teeco chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Imagery was really good. What I liked, was how it seemed every other stanza was a repetition of the previous one. You wrote a beautiful visual, and then related it to your title. Maybe I'm just crazy, but I loved how you combined the nature imagery with the romance element. Brilliant job!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
the fragance of spring - love that line. nice work.
arcane devices chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
It is blatantly obvious that while I was gone... your diction and imagery has matured greatly. I look forward to your next piece. - ADD-san
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