Reviews for Dreamers' Eyes
frouwe chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Your summary is lovely. It definitely drew me in.

The actual story was touching. It's something in the way it's written, sort of whimsical. How you captured the progress of their relationship - slow but steady, observation before real conversation, was beautiful too.
Zaina Anastacia chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Awww! This was an innocent,sweet, light oneshot. I enjoyed it thoroughly! And yeah hazel eyes are for dreamers. :)


Zaina/ Anastacia /Stacia
non.graceful chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
The story had a sad tone so I was expecting a bad ending... To me it would have been a great endin if it were actually sad. Like one of the main characters dying.

Nevertheless it was well written :)
Hiwiwy chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
oh, I absolutely love this!
gulistala chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Ooh me likes this 'proseinpoem form thing'. The guy, man he was incredibly cute! both baby and boyish cute. So shy! Aw!

Congratulations on a job well done. _

Shake Hips Not Fists chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
This was really charming and it is definitely going into my favorites. :) I like how the boy isn't all cocky and arrogant but shy and timid. :) Great job.
JeaLouS One chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
tuggin' at my heartstrings, chiclets. You're quite good at that.
wandless chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
That was so incredibly sweet! Great job :).
mia chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
mippon chapter 1 . 6/18/2006



I'm typing this really fast 'cause there's a spider in my room and oh my gosh it's right there and it's scary but anyway this was a really good oneshot I loved it very much! Hehe.

I likey.
The Banshee's Tears chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
This is so sweet. I dont know how to describe it except sweet.
Imaginary Parachute chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
This story is just amazing. It's almost masterful the way you've managed to capture the many stages of a budding relationship, and it is nothing short of amazing the way shyness is written it. I love that there's no dialogue until the very end. Overall, phenomenal work. Keep it up.
Unwritten Answers chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
beautiful! short and sweet, just the way i like it(: can't wait to read more of your writings(:
Euric's Creed chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
beautifully written. i loved the way it progressed. it really makes you think. bien.