Reviews for Scratch
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Cool. I like how you express finding your self and that you're not part of the crowd. I love it. Nicely done. Keep it up and never quit!
Pont chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Another triumph. I think I'll bookmark you for later visitation, I love your style. This poem comes across good and strong, using an old topic but in a very new and interesting way that really grabbed and kept my attention. You're really something different!

Just a few suggestionsLine 22: 'To tall to ever be one of the crowd' I think it should be 'too' instead of 'to' :)

I just adore this poem. Very well written, keep up the excellent work!

the nonexistant chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Woah, I love this! Great job! I love the feeling of strength as you find it within you and tell of what you were and how you're finding it. "Scratching the surface" I love that. Great work! Keep it up!
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
hehe i got to say, this actually fits you well. for the most part anyways. all in all i liked it. anyways write on!