Reviews for Hope
Pont chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Wow, great use of alliteration, inserting Camus and Poe in there. A very thoughtful and well-planned poem.

Just one or two little things that I noticed,Line 10: 'And the sun sets' I'm not entirely certain that this is a mistake, but I thought I'd point it out, as it feels a little awkward.

Line 14: 'When the sunrises will it free me?' I believe you meant to put a space between 'sun' and 'rises' ;)

I love the formatting choices, too, the cascading feel and your good feel for rhythm really made the piece for me. Nicely done! Really leaves the reader thinking.

Ponteh
the nonexistant chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
I like it. Nice job with this.
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
interesting... but i like it...
strawberry memories chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
it's like the story of Pandora's box. You know, the one where she lets everything bad and horrible escape from a magical box given to her by the gods, except for one thing: hope.

This is a wonderful poem, set on stilts by such a depressing topic. You did an amazing job! Keep up the great work!