Reviews for Synthetic
Che Smolka chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
i love how brutally honest you are in this poem
A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
O.o... Wow.

blood-red white and blue chapter 1 . 5/11/2006

Some of the lines did come up a little screwy, but the concept and most of the others lines were cool.

Prince of the Twice Dead chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
A poem about anarchism on fictionpress? no way!


You clearly expect there to be no corruption in the world, at all, ever. While we're dreaming, why not wish for a mansion in the clouds?
indigonoir chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
Whose life is this anyway?

Whose dream are you living?

Whose world is this anyway?

Most humans are content with mediocrity and you obviously aspire to lead a more meaningful and harmonious life. A suggestion; ask of everything you encounter this: "To what purpose do thee serve me?" Then embrace only that which serves you well.

Have you ever read Victor Frankle's book, "Man's Search for Meaning"? You should.

Thanks for the poem. I like it even though the mere idea of politics bore me to the extent that I would not even consider to deposit the content of my bowls into the head of any of our "world leaders"; they will suffer mental overload. Fuck 'em!