..Hmm, it's kind of vague, because you don't know what you're "corresponding" it with. (Or maybe I just can't see the real meaning of the poem, because your meaningful/beautiful lines are just too complex for my brain) Though, I like the pattern and the way you formatted it. Also, the last few lines were beautiful:

Will you ever know;I wonder…The things that go on behind closed doors?

Brilliant work, bravo