Reviews for Breaking Me Down
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
The bitter emotion is perfectly portrayed in this poem...i enjoyed it.
rawr and other nitely sounds chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Wow. The bitter, pure untainted emotion in this piece just bowls you over in... the huge mass (?) of it. It's amazing, purely amazing.

Bravo.
Ellerfru chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Good poem! I like the last three lines, they sond really angsty but yet there's some hope between them... Wonderfully written.