|Reviews for Nightmares|
| mel62 chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Honestly I don't really like this poem that much - in my opinion I don't think it's one of your best. It's rather short and I think it's because of that, that it doesn't seem to have a lot of substance. Maybe space out the "Scream" and the "Die" with more lines to make it more effective. Feel free to discard this as it isn't intended to offend.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
This describes some of my nightmares perfectly...I haven't read anything of yours in a while...i'm happy to see more.
| Sugar-Craze chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Wow.. Very dramatic, and very good descriptions. Short, but to the point. :) Very good :)