Reviews for Nightmares
mel62 chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Honestly I don't really like this poem that much - in my opinion I don't think it's one of your best. It's rather short and I think it's because of that, that it doesn't seem to have a lot of substance. Maybe space out the "Scream" and the "Die" with more lines to make it more effective. Feel free to discard this as it isn't intended to offend.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
This describes some of my nightmares perfectly...I haven't read anything of yours in a while...i'm happy to see more.
Sugar-Craze chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Wow.. Very dramatic, and very good descriptions. Short, but to the point. :) Very good :)