Reviews for ew i hate this piece
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
I actually kinda like this.. very simple.. and the ending lines wrap it up very nicely.

yes don't be so hard on yourself.. I'll be sure to read more..
Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
it's slightly cliche, but its not horrible, dear. the rhythm was good; and the style you used ((mainly the italization and bolding)) helped to move it along. "so sorry love". nice.