AMAZING~I love it. Stars are some of the few things in life that are amazing to write about and even better when you see them.

"Still-life in real-life" I am in love with that line. I'm not sure about the ending. Cliche? Nah. Well. Out of context. But it's nice in here. Maybe I just didn't read it right. Improper settings of the stars, moon, something! It's daytime, maybe that's a component...rambling. Well, it didn't suit my fancy, but that's proabbly just stupid bias mixed witha bad mood. Nice job. PSIn my "defense" (not that you insulted my piece, it was great critique) the...reverting back to death scenes weren't meant to be viewed as stupid and angsty...they were meant to be real. I care for a man in the marines, in Iraq. And I was trying to express that to him in the piece, that I care for him. I don't know. I just wanted you to know that for some work.

What beautiful imagery! It calls to me.

Wow. this is amazing, not so much description, but pure concept. Beautfiul.

Very mystically light feel and texture to this one. I like the way that it stays consistent in spirit throughout. Good work.

This has insanely beautiful wording and descriptions. I love it.