You say: "... it's fiction so it could be anyway I wanted it to be." If it's fiction, then don't put it in the Essay category. Also, in the last sentence, you have a mistake:"A lovers quarrel." shouldn't it be "A lover's quarrel?" I'm usually not this picky, but if you end something with a mistake (especially if it's going to be graded), it gives the impression that you didn't take the time to go back, and revise it.

Let me clarify. This is not a essay and should not be in the essay section. Move this essay to the fantasy youAngel24