|Reviews for tendon|
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
i actually love your little tangent in the middle,
and how you tied it all together at the end.
"iris bleeding, veins splintered/like bone fractured by blunt blows." -that's pretty strong imagery. i like this.
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
pretty intense imagery. i liked this a lot. great work.