Reviews for His Desires
rebecca chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
i like it. i think its a good plot. write more
Rachel L chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
That was very good!
pianogal chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
hmm...interesting concept and well written too. i really enjoyed this. good job!

Kim
GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
Wow... (clap) this was great! I applaud!Good job!

BFQ
richgirl chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
I think this is a very good short story, and I definately enjoyf it. I really like the whole vibe of it too. Nicley done.
theeighthhouse chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
oh so intriguing.