Reviews for Elemental |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story's really good! I like Faizal... but what happens if they DO go out in the rain? Do they die, or are they just seriously injured? just wondering. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Can't wait for more! _Fiona |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amberle! This is amazing. Please keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start. I can't wait to see where you take it from here! _ Fiona |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the detail that you have put into this and it reads very well. I don't have anything that you can fix, keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() A demon! Didn't they all explode 50 years ago or something? My bio is still longer! HAH! Well, my one is, not the one on . I'll fix that soon enough. NE way...is there more? (please?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing as always! You create such three demensional characters! I'm awaiting an update anxiously! Oh, and there were some grammatical errors that you might want to fix; however, they didn't distract from the message. ( Perhaps a 8.5 on our upcoming test .) |