Reviews for Wrong Way
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Great job, you have a great choice of words it all flows with the poem. Theres only a small problem in the 6th line theres a typo "Like when a the pot is only clay" get rid of the 'the' right? Don't worry about it though, just a typo. I can't spell to save my life. OK you did a great job with this, keep up the good work.