Reviews for Erase
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
very powerful.. i love that ending.. great piece
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
oh, i really like the last three lines although i think it would sound better if there is an article ("the" perhaps) before ghost like "into the ghost"...the word smear is just o nice...you did a good job...

truly yours...
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
I really loved the imagery of the lines on them; it's such a strong metaphor for imprisonment. Well done. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.