|Reviews for Erase|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
very powerful.. i love that ending.. great piece
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
oh, i really like the last three lines although i think it would sound better if there is an article ("the" perhaps) before ghost like "into the ghost"...the word smear is just o nice...you did a good job...
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
I really loved the imagery of the lines on them; it's such a strong metaphor for imprisonment. Well done. Keep up the good work.